the Mid Autumn Festival
Today is Mid Autumn Festival.But it rained today.And also, this is a unlucky Mid Autumn Festival.
I went to the flute class today.But my teacher said that I am not very good and my mom was a little mad at me.I also waited a long time for the teacher in the rain.My school teacher gave me a lot of homework to be a "present" for us.I do not like it , and I still have not finish it yet.The worst thing is---this is a no moon Mid Autumn Festival!I don't like it any way^00^.
This is the worst Mid Autumn Festival ever! (because of typhoon we are not going to a trip now!)
Thank you!
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This is excellent! 2 things.
1. always put a space after each sentence.
2. A lot of people do it, but you aren't supposed to put "but" or "and" after a period(.) They should only go after a comma (,) You aren't supposed to start sentences with them.
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