Music)

Hello there! Everyone likes music, am I right? Everyone has various taste of music. [You can get a taste of music, but that would be when someone introduces you to it for the first time. You preference would be your tastes in music.] Someone likes classical music, other ones live music, or slow numbers. There are a lot of music bands in the world. As for me I like "OneRepublic". That group has a musical talent, Ryan Tedder has a great voice, they have a lot of adoring fans because they often give music festivals or go on tours. [This sentence is correct, but it's also a run-on sentence that should be separated into several parts.] More than that, they always sing a catchy tune, and almost all of(f) the soundtracks became (a) massive hits.I often check their page, download their new tracks and sing along to them where(e)ver I be [You can say "wherever I am" or "wherever I happen to be", but not a mix]. A huge following makes them more popular day by day.
In the evenings, me and my friends gather and sing (a sing) songs, talk and eat shaurma [what is this?]. We also like background music, it makes the atmosphere more comfortable and friendly [run-on sentence again]. I have a piece of music in my room [a piece of music is a song; you have an instrument], it is a guitar. I can't play well, but I try to play better. My husband plays the guitar by ear, because he can't read music good enough. Sometimes he sings out of tune, but i close my ears on it)) As for me, I am (a) tone deaf, I can't sing, but I sing when nobody is at home. Don't wanna shock my homies)
Love music, be happy, dance and sing like nobody looks at you, because only at these moments you are ex(s)tremely happy, and a happy smile can't be a fake.

There are some minor errors in your text but on the whole it feels very natural and colloquial. Great!

Music)

Hello there! Everyone likes music, am I right? Everyone has different tastes in music various taste of music. Someone Some people likes classical music, others other ones live music, or slow numbers. There are a lot of music bands in the world. As for me I like "OneRepublic". That group has a musical talent, Ryan Tedder has a great voice, they have a lot of adoring fans becaus they often give music festivals or go on tours. More than that, they always sing a catchy tune, and almost all off the soundtracks become became a massive hits.I often check their page, download their new tracks and sing along to them whereever I am be. A huge following makes them more popular day by day.
In the evenings me and my friends get together gathertoo formal for the context and sing a sing songs, talk and eat shaurma. We also like background music, it makes the atmosphere more comfortably and friendly. I have a piece of music instrument in my room, it  which is a guitar. I can't play well, but I'm trying to improve play better. My husband plays the guitar by ear, because he can't read music good  well enough. Sometimes he is a sings out of tune, but i close my ears on  to it)) As for me, I am a tone deaf, I can't sing, but I sing when nobody is at home. Don't wanna shock my homies)
Love music, be happy, dance and sing like nobody is looking at you, because only at  inthese moments you are are you extremely happy, and a happy smile can't be fake.

Well done! A few corrections. Be careful with the article A - you often misuse it.