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Hi, my name is Maria and I'm 25 years old. I live in Brazil with my parents. I want to learn and practice English. I have difficulty with English grammar, especially, past, imperative, future and the famous listening and speaking. I work with business and I love my job. My boss is very good, he talks about his day, and we always speak. My mom is my beautiful friend. She supports me when I'm in trouble. My dad is very strong. My grandma is so sweet, I love her. I have two sisters, they're married. I sing , play guitar, and now I am just learning English because I'm going to move out from West Lafayette to ( one month ? ), so, help me guys.Learn English and practice
Hi, my name is Maria and I'm 25 years old. I live in Brazil with my parents. I want to learn and practice English.My boss is very good, he talks about his day and we talk always. You cannot use a comma to separate 2 independent sentences. This mistake is called the comma slice . You have to use a conjunction ( and, but, etc.) to join them, for example. Or you can break them down or use the semi-colon if the 2 sentences are related to one another.
My boss is very good, and he talks about his day, and we talk always.> This is ok but awkward, because it can be change to a better form like the above I wrote or some other form.
Hi, my name is Maria and I'm 25 years old. I live in Brazil with my parents. I want to learn English and practice. I have difficult with English grammar, especially, past, imperative, future and the famous listening and speaking. I work with business and I love my job. My boss is very good, he talks about his day and we talk always. My mom is my beatiful friend, she supports me when I'm in troubles. My dad is very strong. My grandma is so sweetie, I love her. I have two sisters, she is marriage. I sing and play the guitar, and now I just learn English, because go to move out from West Lafayette to one month, so, help me guys.
Learn English and practice
Hi, my name is Maria and I'm 25 years old. I live in Brazil with my parents. I want to learn English and practice. I have difficult difficulties with English grammar, especially, past, imperative, future and the famous listening and speaking. I work with business and I love my job. My boss is very good, he talks about his day and we talk always. My mom is my beatiful beautiful friend, she supports me when I'm in troubles. My dad is very strong. My grandma is so sweetie sweet, I love her. I have two sisters, she is marriage they are married. I sing and play guitar, and now I just learn I'm just learning English, because go to move out I'm going to move out from West Lafayette to in one month, so, help me guys.Want to progress faster?
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