Y. E. Test -9#
9) Write a letter to your host family
Salvador, September 16th, 2016
Hello,
I am Stelle de Rocio, my name is a mix of the Italian version of 'star' and the spanish version of 'dew'. I have spanish, portuguese, italian, roman, celtic, visigoths, native indians, africans and a lot of others roots that I still don't know.
I'm curious and I love to learn about cultures and international relations, also about art, cinema, music, education, literature, astronomy and all that influences people around the world.
My best qualities are be respectful and patience with everyone, I always keep control in difficult situations.
My worst defects are be a very sensible person (I suffer with my exaggerated sensitive) and be a tireless bossy.
Well, but stopping to talk about me, I want to say that I'm really happy about your hospitality and caution to receive me into your house and into your lifes.
I hope that we can enjoy this three weeks learning and having fun! I know that we'll be a beautiful family together.
Thank you for all, I'm excited to met you.
With love,
Stelle.
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Y. E. Test -9#
9) Write a letter to your host familySalvador, September 16th, 2016
Hello,
I am Stelle de Rocio, my name is a mix of the Italian version word for of 'star' and the Spanish (names of languages are always capitalized in English) version of word for 'dew'. I have Spanish, Portuguese, Italian, Roman, Celtic, Visigoths, Native Indian (its better to say Native American), Africans, and a lot of others roots that I still don't know.
I'm curious and I love to learn about cultures and international relations,also about art, cinema, music, education, literature, astronomy and all everything that influences people around the world.
My best qualities are being respectful and patient with everyone, I always keep maintain my self-control in difficult situations.
My worst defects are being a very sensible person (I suffer with from my exaggerated sensitivity) and being a tirelessly bossy.
Well, but lets stopping to talking about me, I want to say that I'm really happy about your hospitality and your bond/willingness caution (caução is better translated as "bond" or "willingness", since caution in English usually means a warning for danger; "caution/watch out!") to receive me into your house and into your lives.
I hope that we can enjoy these three weeks learning and having fun! I know that we'll be a beautiful family together.
Thank you for everythingall, I'm excited to meet you.
With love,
Stelle.
Good job Stelle!
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Y. E. Test -9#
9) Write a letter to your host familySalvador, September 16th, 2016
Hello,
I am Stelle de Rocio, my name is a mix of the Italian version of 'star' and the spanish version of 'dew'. I have spanish, portuguese, italian, roman, celtic, visigoths, native indians, africans and a lot of others roots that I still don't know.
I'm curious and I love to learn about cultures and international relations, I also like art, cinema, music, education, literature, astronomy and all that influences people around the world.
My best qualities are, being respectful and patient with everyone, I always keep control in difficult situations.
My worst defects are, being a very sensible person (I suffer with my exaggerated sensitiveness) and being tirelessly bossy.
But, lets stopping to talk about me, I want to say that I'm really happy about your hospitality and caution to receive me into your house and into your lives.
I hope that we can enjoy this three weeks learning and having fun! I know that we'll be a beautiful family together.
Thank you for all, I'm excited to meet you.
With love,
Stelle.
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There is not mistake.However i think it's an ordinary writing.
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