Essay: How technology can both create opportunities for criminals and also to prevent crime
How technology can both create opportunities for criminals and also to prevent crime
It is really known how much the technology has been increasing over the last few years. There isn't anybody that doesn't have a mobile phone, for instance. But how does technology can be used by police and criminals?
Take mobile phones. This new technological device can he help the police to investigate a crime. For example, if the killers had their mobile on when they are being investigated, the police might know where they might be. It is very easy because of the GPS. In contrast, criminals could turn off their mobile.
Another example on this issue is the analysis of DNA. This really could help the police when clues are left, such as hair, blood or even a cigarette butt. Although there have had some difficult cases, criminals have been caught at the end, thanks to the help of new technological advances. However, they always try not leave tracks that could provide some clues for the police.
To sum up, in spite of new technology could help criminals, the police has more opportunities to catch them now!
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Essay: How technology can both create opportunities for criminals and also to prevent crime
How technology can both create opportunities for criminals and also to prevent crimeIt is really well known how much the technology has been increasing over the last few years. There isn't anybody that doesn't have a mobile phone, for instance. But how can does technology can be used by police and criminals?
Take mobile phones. This new technological device can he help the police to investigate a crime. For example, if the killers had their mobile on when they are being investigated, the police might know where they might be. It is very easy because of the GPS. In contrast, criminals could turn off their mobile.
Another example on this issue is the analysis of DNA. This really could help the police when clues are left, such as hair, blood or even a cigarette butt. Although there have had some difficult cases, criminals have been caught at the end, thanks to the help of new technological advances. However, they always try not to leave tracks that could provide some clues for the police.
To sum up, In summary, in spite of despite the fact that new technology could help criminals, the police has have more opportunities to catch them now!
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Thanks Bob for your request! I am sorry but I can't arrange time to talk with you. Enjoy learning Spanish! Good luck!
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Carmen,
Kimberley's corrections are very good. I have nothing to add. I agree with her that you are writing very well in English.
Perhaps we can arrange a time to talk on Skype. We must remember the six hour time difference between Cordoba and Orlando, Florida.
Bob
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