My Favourite Pet

Today I will talk about my favourite pet dog. I think dogs are cute, even the bigger ones, and somewhat human. They are more loyal than any other animal and can help you with something. They can become good company and can make you laugh and warm your heart. You will feel not lonely because of a pet dog. Many people love the cat, but I have to say that I'm a little scared of them. Even now, I can't figure them out. Maybe it's just what they are. The funny thing is that my school has a lot of cats. You can't imagine how many they are . But you can imagine how scared I am whenever I walk in the school.
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Very well written!

My favorite pet

Today I'll talk about my favorite pet.  The Dogs, I think dog is cute even those bigger dogs and humanization. They're loyal than any other kind of animals. They can help you with something, they can become a good company, they can make you laugh, warm your heart and you won't be lonely because of the dogs. Many people love cats, but I have to say I'm a little scared about that. Even now, I can't figure it out. Maybe it's just what they are. The funny thing is my school has a lot of cats. you can't imagine how many they are. But you can imagine how scared I am whatever I walk in the school.
That's all. Thank you for watching. I hope you guys can help me correct this composition.

Hello Yolanda,

When I read your paragraph I felt like I had to read it again, because of your ideas are not organized well. But don't worry I have many mistakes in my writing as you. In addition, you have to write more and more. Always think back, reflect on your mistakes and analyze them.