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Describe a wild animal you have seen I would like to tell you about an opportunity that I had to see an elephant in summer when I was at high school, which is one of the star attractions in Thu Le Zoo. I was recommended to see this elephant first due to it is popular and frond of entrance Zoo. Its habitat in the zoo is landscaped to resemble a dense jungle. I was truly overawed and felt excited at first sight by its giant appearance. This giant elephant has big ears, black eyes and grey fur covered with body. Both tail and mouth are very long and has rigid horn. Its horn is similar to horn’s buffalo or horn’s cow while its tail is separate feature. One of other feature elephant is short big legs. In the wild, this animal’s diet consists of all small animals, such as: monkeys, birds, other animals as it is a carnivore. It also prefers nibble. When was hungry, it will blew down trees. Elephant can kill young, old or weak animals because they cannot run as fast. In the zoo, it is fed on animals flesh, herbs. At the beginning I felt a little bit apprehensive although elephants are well known as a friendly species with people. After encountering this elephant I changed my mind since It was very cute and really friendly to humans. Evenly, humans had a song about elephant, named “Small elephant in Don Village”. Because elephants in general, they are facing to danger. Now they are endangered species, I believe that people should make a great effort to preserve them from extinction. (Photo inlustration)

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Describe a wild animal you have seen

I would like to tell you about an opportunity that I had to see an elephant in summer when I was at high school, which is one of the star attractions in Thu Le Zoo.
I was recommended to see this elephant first due to it's popularity at the Zoo. Its habitat in the zoo is made tod to resemble a dense jungle. I was overawed and felt excited at first by its giant appearance. This giant elephant has big ears, black eyes and grey body covered in fur. Both tail and mouth are very long and have rigid horns. Its horn is similar to a buffalo or cow horn while its tail is a separate feature. One of the other features of the elephant is its short big legs.
In the wild, this animal’s diet consists of all small animals, such as: monkeys, birds, and other animals as it is a carnivore. It also prefers to nibble. When hungry, it will trample down trees. Elephants can kill young, old or weak animals because they cannot run as fast. In the zoo, it is fed on animal flesh and vegetation.
At the beginning I felt a little bit apprehensive although elephants are well known as a friendly towards people. After encountering this elephant I changed my mind since It was very cute and really friendly to humans. Humans even have a song about an elephant called “Small elephant in Don Village”.
Elephants in general are facing danger and are now an endangered species, I believe that people should make a great effort to preserve them from extinction.
(Photo in illustration)

Very well written!

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