About Swimming

Last Sunday I swam in the afternoon. I like swimming very much .I think that swimming is healthy for me , and I can't swim very well .But when I was in the US, I swam every Sunday. And now I have studied swimming I am very happy . Although my skin gets more black it doesn't matter.
I swam in the pool of a high school .If we want to swim in there ,we should buy a ticket .The price is different for different people.
Residents of Sunnyvale pay 4 dollars, for non-resident it is five dollars . I was a visitor so I paid 5 dollars every time .
This pool will be closed at September 25th .I guess that the temperature will be too low. Then it is not good for swimming for most people so it closes . So I will go to swimming two times .
See you everybody .

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About swimming

I swam last Sunday in the afternoon. I like swimming very much. I think that swimming is healthy for me. I can't swim very well, but when I was in the US, I swam every Sunday. Now, I have studied how to swim. I'm very happy. Although it makes my skin darker it doesn't matter. I swam at a high school pool. If we want to swim in there, we need to buy a ticket. The price is different for different people.
Residents of Sunnyvale pay four dollars, while non-residents pay five dollars. I was a visitor, so I had to pay 5 dollars each time.
This pool will be closed on September 25th. I guess that the temperature gets too low, and it's not good swimming conditions for most people so it closes. Because of that, I will go to swimming only two times.
Just written here. See you everybody.