小籠包。。。
我頭一次食小籠包下星期尾。。。好好味喎！佢係最佳！
我今年想試舊整蝦肉小籠包。 我要買點心都刀子。 佢喺美國好貴， 但係店舖喺SanFrancisco賣價錢公道。
ngo tau jat cin sik siu lung bao gau sing kei mei....hou hou mei! keoi hai zeoi gaai!
ngo gam nin soeng si haa zing siu lung bao. ngo jiu mai dim sam dou zi. keoi hai mei gwok hou gwai, dan6 hai6 dim3 pou3 San Francisco mai gaa3 ci4n gung1 dou6.
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小籠包。。。
我頭一次食小籠包下星期尾我上個禮拜六／日 << ngo5 soeng6 go3 lai5 baai3 luk6六 OR jat6日
( it is unusual to say ''weekend 周末'' in Cantonese, we just say 禮拜六／日...point out the day like Monday/Tuesday ''last weekend'' means 上個周末（writen Chinese) 上個禮拜六or日( speaking Chinese) )
我頭一次食小籠包下星期尾
第一次食小籠包 << dai6 jay1 zi1 sik6 siu2 lung5 baau
好好味喎！佢係最佳！
好好味喎 <that's good! Or you could use 幾好味喎 means: (that taste) not bad!
佢係最佳< 佳is written Chinese. If you want to say great> 正
What's more, we don't use 佢 on food or the object. So it's better to say'' 直頭超正！
我今年想試(下)舊(舊means ''pices of'')整蝦肉小籠包。 我要買點心都（if you say ''and'' , you should use 同埋 tung4 maai4）刀子。 佢喺美國(買buy>maai5)好貴， 但係喺SanFrancisco嘅ge3 店舖價錢賣得maai6 dak1 公道。
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小籠包。。。
我頭一次食小籠包下星期尾。。。好好味喎！佢係最正！我今年想試舊整蝦肉小籠包。 我要買點心都刀子。 佢喺美國好貴， 但係店舖喺SanFrancisco賣價錢公道。
ngo tau jat cin sik siu lung bao gau sing kei mei....hou hou mei! keoi hai zeoi jiang!
ngo gam nin soeng si haa zing siu lung bao. ngo jiu mai dim sam dou zi. keoi hai mei gwok hou gwai, dan6 hai6 dim3 pou3 San Francisco mai gaa3 ci4n gung1 dou6.
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