Essay 3: Clothing (part 4)
In sum, though some may oppose this fact, many believe that different clothes influence our behavior. Not only will some clothes made us feel uncomfortable, but also they can affect the way that others think about and behave toward us. So every person should pay careful attention to his clothing.
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Essay 3: Clothing (part 4)
In sum, though some may disagree oppose this fact, many believe that different clothes influence our behavior. Not only will some clothes make us feel uncomfortable, but also they can also affect the way that others think about and behave toward us. So* every person should pay careful attention to his clothing.*"So" usually isn't used to start a sentence. Try "As a result, ..." or "Because of this, ...". Great work!
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