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some views about a social problem Please help me check it In the past, people who own a stable and well-paid job such as a functionary or a government official is a very enviable thing. But now, thanks to the rapid development of our society so that there are immense of opportunities that people can live for. The development of society is a very complicated thing, which was effected by uncounted of factors and can result to all sorts of consequences to the society. I think the reason why so many people/ are enthusiastic about/ changing their job is exactly behind it.       One of the most important reasons that resulting to the happening of the phenomenon is the great enrichment of our material wealth and social resources. Different from the past. People are no longer restricted by the shortage of intelligences and channel. Taking a view through our society, Internet, technical innovation and many all-new concepts are constantly encouraging a group of people who filled with the spirit of adventure. Those of people don’t /regard/ a job as the foundation of their lives. On the contrary, they are willing to give up their existing job to chase a better life even if it takes great risks. To sum up, our concept to lives had been diverted a lot at the same time when our material basic was improved. That’s why people are daring to do such a deed that they could never have thought in the past.       I think it doesn't matter for people to change their job. Maybe it’s a good sign that our society is still in activity. We shouldn't prevent a young man chasing his ideal life that he want.

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Societal Change

In the past, people who had a stable and well-paying job such as a functionary or a government official were considered to have a desirable occupation.The development of society is very complicated because it is effected by numerous factors that can have different consequences to the general population. But now, thanks to the rapid development of our society there are a plethora of opportunities that people can choose from. I think that this is the reason why so many people are enthusiastic about changing their job.

One of the most important reasons for this change is the great enrichment of material wealth and social resources. Taking a look at our society today, the advent of the Internet, technical innovations and many all-new concepts are constantly encouraging people to be filled with the spirit of adventure. This new generation of people don’t regard a job as the foundation of their lives. On the contrary, they are willing to give up their existing job to chase a better life even if it takes great risks.

To sum it all up, our concept of what we can do with our lives has been changed since our society has gained material wealth. That’s why people are daring to take risks that they could never have thought were possible in the past. I think it doesn't matter if people change their job. Maybe it’s a good sign that our society is still actively evolving. We shouldn't prevent a young man from chasing the ideal life that he wants.

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