New friends
I went to the beach and while I was swimming I don't saw that a boy saw me and later when I went with my mom to the other site of beach ,the same boy bring closer me and say me "hello" and we talk a good time while my mom made excercise. He was with his friend , and he introduced me . They practice surf ,so I hope it pass a little weeks for learn a new sport.
It was a good morning, and I made two friends.
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New friends
I went to the beach and while I was swimming I didn't see that a boy was staring at me. Later on, when I went with my mom to the other site of beach ,the same boy came closer to me and told me "hello" and we had talked for a good time while my mom was doing exercise. He had introduced me with his friend .After that, they started to practice surf. So, I wished to spend a few weeks for learning a new sport.It was a good morning and I made two friends.
[Note: We should use "a few" instead of "a little" before a countable noun. We can use "a little" before a non-countable noun. In your statement, "week" is a countable noun.]
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New friends
I went to the beach and while I was swimming I didnt see a boy who was watching at me, later when I went with my mom to the other site of beach ,the same boy came closer to me and said "hello" then we had a great time together. While my mom was doing excercise, he introduced me to his friend they both practice surf , and I hope it won't take weeks to learn a new sport.It was a good morning, and I made two friends.
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New friends
I went to the beach and while I was swimming I didn't see that a boy was looking at me and later when I went with my mom to the other site of beach ,the same boy comes closer to me and says "hello" to me and we talk a good time while my mom exercised. He was with his friend , and he introduced me . They surf ,so I hope to spend a few weeks so I can learn a new sport.It was a good morning, and I made two friends.
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New friends
I went to the beach, and while I was swimming I did not see that a boy had seen me. Later, when I went with my mom to the other site of beach, the same boy came closer to me and said "hello." We talked for a good time while my mom was exercising. He was with his friend, and he introduced me. They practice surfing, so I hope it will only be a few weeks until I learn a new sport.It was a good morning, and I made two friends.
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