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Shopping I am going to talk about shopping, in first place about what kind of buyer I am, when and where I usually go shopping and for finally, I want you to talk about one thing that I have never bought, and I won´t buy. I considerer to me a saver person, I like to go shopping but I really like spend much time looking for sales before I go shoping. I have never spent a lot of money in things that I didn´t need it. I annoys me when people spend a lot of time in a shop and finally they buy things that they didn´t need it. If I were they Iwoudn´t buy anything before I need it. I usually go shopping in sales, because is the best time for buy basic clothes with good prices. I usually buy shoes and boots in summer sales for I use it in the next autum. When I was young, I used to buy coats in winter, but now I getting used to buying coats the summer before that I use it. This is the manner to save a lot of money in clothes. I wish my mum wouldn´t spend a lot of time inside a shop when we are going shopping. I would like spend time having a lunch with her. For finally, I would like you to hear me about one thing that I have never bought, I have never bought a static bike for people doing exercise inside home. I really hate it. If I like ridding, I will do outside with a mountainbike. I regret not ride more when I was a child.

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Shopping

I am going to talk about shopping, [at] first place - what kind of buyer I am,  when and where I usually go shopping and finally,( I want you to talk about one thing that I have never bought, and I won´t buy. )[what do you want? correct this sentence yourself]

I consider myself as a saver person, I like shopping [don't use so much verbs together while you can shorten them with just using few of them] but I really like spending a lot of (much and many can be used in non-question sentence but it is better to use a lot of or lots of) time looking for sales before I go shoping. I have never spent a lot of money in the things that I didn´t need. It annoys me when people spend a lot of time in a shop and finally they buy things that they didn´t need. If I were they Iwoudn´t buy anything unless I need it.

I usually go shopping in sales, because it is the best time for buy basic clothes with good prices. I usually buy shoes and boots in summer sales for next autum.
When I was young, I used to buy coats in winter, but now I getting used to buying coats in the summer. 
This is the best manner to save a lot of money in clothes.

I wish my mum wouldn´t spend a lot of time inside a shop when we are shopping. I would like to spend time having a lunch with her.

Finally, I would like you to hear from me about one thing that I have never bought. It is a static bike for people who do exercise inside home. I really hate it. If I like ridding, I will do outside with a mountainbike. I regret that I didn't ride more when I was a child.








****I tried my best to correct :) I am studying too, so sorry if I didn't correct in a right way and if I missed some more mistakes. 

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I like to go --- I like going
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I considerer to me a saver person. --- I consider myself as a saver peroson.
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If I were they Iwoudn´t buy anything before I need it. This sentence is somehow hard to understand.
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finally they buy things that they didn´t need it Finally they buy things which aren't useful for them.

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