Answer to an e-mail
Dear Mrs. Bennett:
We are pleased that you are interested in applying for the job opening. As you don’t specifically mention when you will arrive in the city, we would like to know when you could attend an interview at our office in London, which may be reached by the bus to Central London.
Here are the available dates and times:
October 1 at 9am.
October 11 at 12pm.
October 21 at 9am.
October 31 at 9 am.
We look forward to receiving your date confirmation reply, plus the details of two referees.
Best regards.
Thank you in advance for your kind corrections and suggestions.
Seb :)
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Answer to an e-mail
Dear Mrs. Bennett:We are pleased that you are interested in applying for the job opening. As Since you don’t didn't specifically mention when you will arrive in the city, we would like to know when you could attend an interview at our office in London, which may be reached by the bus to Central London.
I suggest simplifying the previous sentence as follows: "Please let us know when you can come for an interview at our office in London, which can be reached by the bus to Central London."
Here are the available dates and times:
October 1 at 9am.
October 11 at 12pm.
October 21 at 9am.
October 31 at 9 am.
We look forward to receiving your date confirmation reply a reply confirming one of these dates, plus the details of two referees two references. [I assume by 'referees' you mean people who will write something supporting the job applicant. The correct word for this is 'references' or 'referrals']
Best regards.
Thank you in advance for your kind corrections and suggestions.
Seb :)
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Good job. Well written.
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Hi, Dew:
Thank you very much (:
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