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My second short essay What I Have Learned from My years at University What sculpture is to a block of marble, university life is to a human soul. What my years at university left for me abound, but three stand out. Looking back on those years with nostalgia, I'm proud of the knowledge and skills I gained at university. The certificates I had won brought me about the chances to have interviews in big companies. Skills, like organizing and hosting big evening parties, coupled with raising funds, make me prominent among a flood of job seekers. Furthermore, leaving parents for university is not so much a liability as an asset for me to be more independent. I grappled with the chore and homesickness as well, juggled schoolwork and taking care of myself. It is Those days that makes me more of an adult than the age. Last but not the least, my years at university were packed with love and care from my friends there. Just as knowledge, skills, and independence make a remarkable difference to my future, so the support from friends is necessary for me to play cards right. Gone are those days when I was at university, but they left me too much which is worth a lifetime to appreciate.

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My second short essay

What I Have Learned from My Years at University
What sculpture is to a block of marble, university life is to a human soul. What my years at university left for me abound, but three things stand out.
Looking back on those years with nostalgia, I'm proud of the knowledge and skills I gained at university. The certificates I won gave me the chances of an interview in big companies. Skills, like organizing and hosting big soirees, coupled with raising funds, make me prominent among a flood of job seekers. Furthermore, leaving parents for university is not so much a liability as an asset for me to be more independent. I grappled with the chore and homesickness as well, juggled schoolwork and taking care of myself. It is those days that made me more of an adult than my age would imply. Last but not the least, my years at university were packed with love and care from my friends there. Just as knowledge, skills, and independence made a remarkable difference to my future, so the support from friends was necessary for me to my play cards right.
Gone are those days when I was at university, but they left me with so much that would take a lifetime to appreciate.

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