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Firstly, I am a person that only believes in stranger things if I see those things with my own eyes. Last week a weird thing happened to me and it scared me.
Anyway, last week I was travelling with my girlfriend to Los Angeles, USA. We stayed in a hotel, and near this resort there was an lake.
So, one of the days that I stayed there I decided to go walk alone, it was about 11pm, and while I was walking, I noticed some voices calling for my name, and I also heard a cracking noise, a sound similar to trees breaking. It was the first time in my life that I really felt fear, so I started to run back to the hotel.
The next morning, I went there again, and something really creepy had happened, all the trees around the lake were destroyed and I also found some dead animals. I really don’t know what had happened, but it was really sinister.
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Could someone correct my text please?
Firstly, I am a person that only believes in supernatural things if I see those things with my own eyes. Last week a weird thing happened to me and it scared me. I was travelling with my girlfriend to Los Angeles, USA. We stayed in a hotel, and near this resort there was a lake. One of the days that I stayed there I decided to go walk alone, it was about 11 pm, and while I was walking, I noticed some voices calling for my name, and I also heard a cracking noise, a sound similar to trees breaking. It was the first time in my life that I felt real fear, so I started to run back to the hotel.The next morning, I went there again, and something really creepy had happened, all the trees around the lake were destroyed and I also found some dead animals. I really don’t know what had happened, but it was really creepy.
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