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Not just a photo This is a photo of the city of Barcelona. I was there in on August for my second trip alone. Beyond the fact it is beautiful, this picture is a nice memory of that journey. Indeed, it was took by a British guy I met in this great almost secret place in the north of Barcelona where you have a 360-degree view of the city. He was smoking a joint as we were admiring the landscape. He proposed himself to shoot the photo which would have been awesome, he said. He was right. We chatted for an half hour talking about the fact he had been living in Barcelona for more than 10 year as well as about travel and the fact that, in his opinion, the Sagrada Familia will remain an eternal work in progress. This is one of the most beautiful moment I had got along my last trip!

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Not just a photo

This is a photo of the city of Barcelona. I was there in on August for my second trip alone. Beyond the fact that it is beautiful, this picture is a nice memory of that journey. Indeed, it was took taken  by a British guy I met in this great, almost secret place in the north of Barcelona where you have a 360-degree view of the city.
He was smoking a joint as we were admiring the landscape. He proposed offered  himself to shoot the photo which would have been be awesome, he said. He was right.
We chatted for an half hour, talking about/discussing the fact that he had been living in Barcelona for more than 10 years, as well as about travel and the fact that, in his opinion, the Sagrada Familia will remain an eternal work in progress. This is one of the most beautiful moments I had got along during my last trip!

Any chance this is the view from Turo de la Rovira, near the Carmel neighborhood? It's a bit of a hike up a hill from a nondescript neighborhood. I know there's a ledge there much like the one in your photo, where you feel you're on a magic carpet above the city. It's much quieter than the famous view points, and a great place to catch the sunset with some locals and errant tourists.

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Not just a photo

This is a photo of the city of Barcelona. I was there in August for my second trip alone. Beyond the fact that it is beautiful, this picture is a nice memory of that journey. Indeed, it was taken by a British guy I met in this great, almost secret place in northern Barcelona where you have a 360-degree view of the city.
He was smoking a joint as we were admiring the landscape. He offered to shoot the photo, which he said would be awesome. He was right.
We chatted for an half hour about the fact he had been living in Barcelona for more than 10 years as well as travel, and the fact that, in his opinion, the Sagrada Familia will remain an eternal work in progress. This is one of the most beautiful moments I had along my last trip!


"Indeed" should be used to confirm the audience's expected suspicions or explicit suspicions. The sentence is in which you used it is perfect without it.

Never say "an half hour". It should be "a half-hour" or "half an hour".

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