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My interest behind learning English I'm a student of Business Administration in undergraduation level. I'm planning to go to Canada to pursue my MBA degree. My interest behind learning English is to go to Canada for higher education. I studied English for 12 years in school and college, but didn't help me to improve my English at all. For this reason, I'm learning and practicing English by my own afford. I hope I will able to be fluent in English.

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My interest behind learning English

I'm a student of Business Administration at undergraduate level. I'm planning to go to Canada to pursue my MBA degree.

My interest behind learning English is to go to Canada for higher education. I studied English for 12 years in school and college, but that didn't help me to improve my English at all.

For this reason, I'm learning and practicing English on my own accord*. I hope I will be fluent in English.

*or, ...English by my own efforts.

Very well written!

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My interest behind learning English

I'm a student of Business Administration at the undergraduate level. I'm planning to go to Canada to pursue my MBA degree.

My interest behind learning English is to go to Canada for higher education. I studied English for 12 years in school and college, but it didn't help me to improve my English at all.

That's why I'm learning and practicing English by my own afford. I hope I will able to become fluent in English.


Great job & great English! Although "by my own afford" is technically correct, it sounds pretty strange in this case. I wouldn't say it, & I think most native speakers of English would agree that it sounds a bit unnatural.

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