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A bad day I'm feel very bad in today, I'm make a mess of the work. I have uploaded a mistake document of 2016 Asia beauty exhibition at the morning. Then I struggled to find the person in charge of the phone, but she not in office newly. she has gone to trip business in other city.She was looking for her assitant to help me revised these wrong information. I also have to wait for more than 3 hours online, after could uploaded new file. My patner are constantly urging me to provide a new document for him, I only waiting and couldn't doing anything. I‘m really worried the impact of this wrong on the progress of the work.Fortunately,the final document is submitted up, waiting for the show host new reply.

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I'm feeling very bad in today, I'm make making a mess of the my work. I have uploaded a mistake on the document of the 2016 Asia beauty exhibition at the this morning. Then I struggled to find the person in charge of the phone, but she was not in the office newly. sShe has gone to on a trip business trip in to another city. She was looking for her assitant assistant to help me revised these wrong information documents. I also have had to wait for more than 3 hours online, after I could uploaded the new file. My patner partner are is constantly urging me to provide a new document for him, but I only waiting and couldn't doing anything. I‘m really worried about the impact of this wrong mistake on the progress of the my work. Fortunately, the final document is now submitted up, and I'm now waiting for the show host to new reply.

Here are a few tips: 

Always use a capital letter when you start a new sentence. (she has gone on a / She has gone on a)

Be careful with spelling. (assitant - patner / assistant - partner) 

Remember to use the correct tense. (I'm make a mess - I'm feel very bad Present Simple / I'm making a mess - I'm feeling very bad Present Continious) 

I hope this helps :)

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A bad day

I feel very bad today. I messed the work. I have uploaded a wrong document, a 2016 Asia beauty exhibition in the morning. Then I struggled to find the person in charge of the phone, but she has just left the office. She had gone to a business trip in another city. She was looking for her assistant to help me revised these wrong information. I have to wait for more than 3 hours to be online so I could upload the new file. My partner are constantly urging me to provide a new document for him. I am only waiting and couldn't do anything. I‘m really worried of the impact of this mistake on the progress of the work. Fortunately, the final document is now submitted, waiting for the host show's new reply.
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(I feel) very bad in today, I (made) a mess of the work. I have uploaded a mistake document of 2016 Asia beauty exhibition (in) the morning. Then I struggled to find the person in charge on the phone, but she (was) not in office newly. she has gone to trip business in (another city) .She was looking for her (assistant) to help me revise these wrong information. I also (had) to wait for more than 3 hours online, after I uploaded the new file. My (partner) (was) constantly (arguing) me to provide a new document for him, I was only waiting and couldn't do anything. I‘m really worried the impact of this wrong on the progress of the work. ​Fortunately,the final document is submitted up, waiting for the show host new reply.

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