Saturday July 31th 2016
I haven't many things to write today, because I passed my whole day at a party. It was very good! There was fun and joy.
My dad is a cooker, so he has a restaurant in my city at City Hall and also he works at some parties. So some weekends he works at a party and on weekdays he works in his restaurant. I know, it's hard.
At that party my dad worked, she made many delicious things. I played a lot with my brother there.
At 9:00 p.m., I already was tired and sleepy, so as soon as possible we went away, but my dad stayed there.
Tomorrow I'll wake up early and get back home.
Could someone please correct me?
Thank you very much, it will help me a lot.
Have a nice day! :)
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Saturday July 31st 2016
I don't have many things to write about today because I spent my whole day at a party. It was very good! There was fun and joy (not natural. I would only say, "I had fun.").My dad is a cooker, and has a restaurant in my city at City Hall, and also he also works at some parties. So some weekends he works at a party and on weekdays he works in his restaurant. I know, it's hard.
At that party my dad worked, she and made many delicious things. I played a lot with my brother there.
At 9:00 p.m., I already was tired and sleepy, so we left as soon as possible we went away, but my dad stayed there.
Tomorrow, I'll wake up early and go back home.
Could someone please correct me?
Thank you very much, it will help me a lot.
Have a nice day! :)
Good work Aninha, keep practicing! Feel free to ask me if you have any questions
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