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A new start
I have attended an English class of speaking in my workplace. It was hard for me to speak a whole sentence and interact easily with others in class because I was afraid of making mistakes in grammar or vocabulary. Also I felt that I didn't have enough vocabularies to extend the range of conversation. In the class, I got the lowest grade on speaking and It really made me disappointed. So I want to make a plan to improve my English abilities. Writing everyday is a new start for learning English.a new start
I have attended a spoken English class at work. It's hard for me to say a whole sentence and have interactions easily with others in class because I'm afraid of making mistakes in grammar or vocabulary. Also I feel that I don't have enough vocabulary to extend the range of conversation. In the class, I got the lowest grade on speaking and It really makes me disappointed. So I want to make a plan to improve my English abilities. Writing everyday is a new start for learning English.Hello Kelly,
Everybody has to start somewhere and builds from the beginning. Confidence is the biggest problem many people have in speaking. Be strong. You can listen to some English phrases and then record yourself saying them - try to make your sound as close as possible to the original.
Although there are mistakes in your writing, Everyone seems to be able to understand your message without a problem so you have nothing to be afraid of.
Best wishes
Bob
a new start
I have attended an English speaking class of speaking in (my working firm) the firm where I work. It was hard for me to speak a whole sentence and have interactions easily with others in class. This is because I'm afraid of making mistakes like in wrong grammar or vocabulary. Also I feel that I don't have enough vocabulary to extend the range of conversation (It is possible to change this slightly to make it more fluent by changing 'extend the range of conversation' to 'speak easily in English'). In the class, I got the lowest grade on in speaking and it really makes made me disappointed. So, I want to make a plan to improve my English abilities. Writing everyday is a new start for learning English.You wrote well and got your point across. An English speaker would have understood what you were saying the entire way through. There were a few errors in 'articles', 'prepositions', and some 'use of tenses', but nothing to be disappointed about. I also suggested an edit for one sentence to make it flow more easily. As I said though, an English speaker would likely be able to understand your meaning anyway.
Well done!
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