Today is very warm^-^
Today, my school ended early^-^
We were able to return home before noon.So I went to a shrine in my town.
There were lots of tourists.I dropped the phone in the bath x(!!!!!!!!!oh my gosh.......
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Today is very warm^-^
Today, my school ended early^-^We were able to return home before noon, so I went to a nearby shrine.
There were lots of tourists there. I dropped the phone in the bath x(!!!!!!!!!oh my gosh.......
Great job!
Note: Although there was nothing wrong with your entry, I just changed a couple of things to make it sound more natural. In the last line, if it was your phone, I think it would be better to say, "I dropped my phone in the bath."
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so cool!
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arigato~!watashi wa syashin wo torunoga daisuki dakara sou iwarete totemo uresii desu^-^!!watashi no keitai denwa wa mou ugokima sen...konnsyuu atarashii keitai denwa wo kaini ikku yotei desu ^-^/
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Anata ha shashin wo toruno ga jouzudesu. Anata no keitai denwa ha daijoubudesuka X(.
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ahaha ^^
thank you!
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