Writing 8 - Tim felt angry as he got off the train...
The next day was his mother's birthday and it was the last train on this dark and foggy day.
Tim had bought a disc for his mother because she loved music, in particular old songs. He had bought her a disc of a famous singer. His mother's favorite singer was Elvis Presley therefore he had tried to buy something similar... even though he didn't know a lot of old music, he wanted to surprise her.
However, it was impossible now, because he had lost the last train. After leaving the station he went home and bitterly cried. When he finished, he took the phone and phoned his mother, unfortunately she didn't answer his call.
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Writing 8 - Tim felt angry as he got off the train...
The next day was his mother's birthday and it was the last train on this dark and foggy day.Tim had bought a disc for his mother because she loved music, in particular old songs. He had bought her a disc of a famous singer. His mother's favorite singer was Elvis Presley therefore he had tried to buy something similar... even though he didn't know a lot of old music, he wanted to surprise her.
However, it was impossible now, because he had missed the last train. After leaving the station he went home and cried bitterly. When he finished, he took the phone and phoned his mother; unfortunately she didn't answer his call.
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