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At the age of six and half, he started his career with the work of mopping on the table in a hotel. After a while he began serving drinks to the customers. Then he began to set plates in front of them. At the start he got some coins. After that he began getting paper notes. Now his owner(boss) began to trust him. He started special taking care of visitors at the shop. He quickly took orders and told customers’ bills to the boss. For this reason, it was more convenience in business than before.
One day before the child day, he was mopping on the table. One press photographer took his picture in a magnificent pose. In several worthless political parties and redundant leaders got in a new life. There was a huge uproar in parliament and legislative assemblies of states. Opposite parties stayed determined (firm) at their place. The work stayed standstill. Jugglers of statistics reported loss of billions. Political pundit expressed serious anxiety on existing condition. There kept an uproar on this matter(issue) for several days from government to newspaper. Then everything gradually became quiet.
He kept busy in the work of used plates and mopping in the hotel the whole day. Late in the evening having said to his boss to come early tomorrow morning, he quickly took the road of his home. He kept thinking on the way before he reaches home that will ask ( the boss) to give a job in hotel his younger brother to see him (boss) in a good mood.
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At the age of six and a half he started his career with cleaning tables in a hotel. After a while he began serving drinks to the customers. Then he began to set plates in front of them. At the start he got some coins. After that he began getting paper notes. Now his owner (boss)* began to trust him. He started taking special care of visitors to the shop. He quickly took orders and gave customers’ bills to the boss. For this reason, he was more convenient in business than before.One day before the child day(?), he was mopping the table. A press photographer took his picture in a magnificent pose. Several worthless political parties and redundant leaders got a new life. There was a huge uproar in parliament. Opposite parties stayed determined (firm) in their place. The work stood still. Jugglers of statistics reported losses of billions. Political pundits expressed serious anxiety on the existing condition. There remained an uproar on this matter (issue) for several days from government in the newspapers. Then everything gradually became quiet.
He kept busy clearing the plates and cleaning in the hotel the whole day. Late in the evening having said to his boss to come early tomorrow morning, he quickly took the road home. He kept thinking on the way there that will ask the boss to give a hotel job to his younger brother and to see the boss when he was in a good mood.
Now, the owner, his boss, ....
Very well written!
(what does 'child day' mean?)
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