Fired City
Every day , and with the beginning of the morning, a large explosion shacks the capital Baghdad... a lot of victims and unidentified bodies .
Baghdad city was one of the most important stations of Commerce and Tourism in the last century , it was very very beautiful ...
The Iraqi people are very cultured and a love the life..
Politics did all that destroying...
Iraqi politicians are bad...
Correct my mistakes....
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Fired City
Every morning, a large explosion shakes the capital, Baghdad... every morning there are a lot of victims and unidentified bodies.Baghdad city was one of the most important stations of commerce and tourism in the last century , it was very, very beautiful ...
The Iraqi people are very cultured and they love life..
Politics is responsible for all that destruction...
Iraqi politicians are bad...
Correct my mistakes....
Hello--I changed "shacks" to "shakes," and you do not need to capitalize commerce or tourism. Otherwise, I just edited your paragraph into standard English phrasing to make it flow. Best regards and keep up the good work.
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