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My story
I studied abroad in New Hampshire to study English and Art, because I had always wanted to learn them ever since I was little. When I get there, I found out I was the only exchange student from Asia. All exchange students could speak English fluently, so I was inferior to them. But I tried to keep up with them little by little and I exerted effort. I was not regretting this study abroad life and now my dream is an interpreter.I went to New Hampshire as an exchange student to study English and Art. I had always wanted to study them. When I got there I found out that I was the only exchange student from Asia. All the other exchange students could speak English fluently, so I felt inferior. However, I tried to keep up with them a little at a time and I worked hard. I don't regret this experience and now my dream is to become an interpreter.
My story
I studied abroad was an exchange student* in New Hampshire to study English and Art, because I had always wanted to learn them these subjects ever since I was little. When I get there, I found out** I was the only exchange student from Asia. All the other exchange students could speak English fluently, so I felt I was inferior to them. But I tried to keep up with them little by little and I exerted effort. I was do not regretting this time I spent study studying abroad life and now my dream is to train to be an interpreter.***ユッミさん、良い記事です。その学校はどこでしたか?前年マイン州に(ポートランドの近く)住んでいました。
* Were you part of an exchange program? 留学生でしたか? Making this change, you add detail and clarity, and you avoid repeating the verb "study" in the same sentence.
** "found out" is fine. Other options: "I discovered I was the only . . ." or "I found that I was the only . . ."
*** すごい!がんばってください!
My story
I studied abroad English and Art in New Hampshire, because I had always wanted to learn them (about it) since I was little. When I get there, I found out I was the only exchange student from Asia. All exchange students (redundance) of them could speak English fluently, so I was inferior to them. But I tried to keep up with them little by little and I exerted effort. I was not regretting this study abroad life and now my dream is to become (or "to be") an interpreter.Sorry if I don't explain it properly or something else.
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