Practice No.2 Please correct my notebook.
I had been to "Kinosaki" in Japan as a my trip.
There are many hot springs there. It was wonderful time then because I love them.
I had gotten into five kinds of hot springs.
If you have a chance to visit "Kinosaki", it's better to get into a hot springs.
You won't regret certainly.
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Practice No.2 Please correct my notebook.
I went on a trip to "Kinosaki" in Japan.There are many hot springs there. I had a wonderful time there because I love them.
I went into five kinds of hot springs.
If you have a chance to visit "Kinosaki", it's a good idea to go into a hot spring.
You certainly won't regret it.
hope this helps and makes sense, let me know if you need more help!
James.
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