A superhero when i was a child always wanted be a superhero, be able to fly around the world and help people but with time i learned something important, we can be that superhero. We are a superhero

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Juan Ledezma

A superhero when i was a child always wanted be a superhero, be able to fly around the world and help people but with time i learned something important, we can be that superhero. We are a superhero everytime to we touch the hearth of the others, everytime to we make a good action, to we help others and show compassion, that's be a superhero. And if you can't fly you can do something better, you can walk, side by side with the people who you love and in this way you will fly, Today i still being a child, i believe in superheros, i believe in you, i believe in me. Namaste

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A superhero

wWhen i I was a child I always wanted be a superhero, be able to fly around the world and help people. bBut with time i I learned something important, we can be that superhero.

We are a superhero everytime to we touch the hearth hearts of the others, everytime to we do make a good action, to we help others and show compassion, that's be a superhero. And if you can't fly you can do something better, you can walk, side by side with the people who you love and in this way you will fly,.

Today i I still am being a child, i I believe in superheros superheroes, i I believe in you, i I believe in me.

Namaste

Hi Juan! A very great and touching article.

Here are a few tips for improving your English skills:

- Always use capital letters when you start a new sentence. (When I was a child...)

- Always use a capital letter when talking about yourself (I). (I believe in superheroes...)

- Be careful when using "be, to and make" - PROOF READ your sentences to check it makes sense! (Everytime to we do make a good action)

- If your writing a full sentence be sure to end it with a FULL STOP - . not a COMMA - , (In this way you will fly.)

I hope this advice helps you :)

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