Chinese children are suffering from much homework and various training cources
Nowdays, most of Chinese children are given excessive homework by their schools. From Mondays to Fridays, my 9-year-old daughter has to work on her homework until 9:00pm. She also has more to do on the weekends.
As China has the biggest population in the globe, the competitions for better employment and life are becoming very serious and fierce.
To strengthen their various skills, almost every kid is sent to training schools for different courses, like dancing, music, weiqi and drawing, etc. on the weekends by his parents.
I learn from some friends who live in Europe that only when a student is in Grade 6, he is assigned to some homework by the teacher. That's really reasonable!
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Chinese children are suffering from too much homework and too many extra-curricular courses.
Nowadays, mostAs China has the biggest population in the world
>As China has the biggest population in the world, the number of students entering the job market every year is huge, making the competition for better employment opportunities in life after college very intense( indeed) > Indeed > for emphasis .
To strengthen their various skills, almost every kid is sent to training schools for different courses-- like such as dancing, music, weiqi and drawing classes -- on the weekends by their parents.
> In an attempt to have an edge over the others , almost every kid is taking courses in order to develop their extra-curricular skills: dancing , music, weiqi, drawing skills, etc.
I learn from some friends who live in Europe that only when a student is in Grade 6, he is they are assigned to some homework to do by the their teachers. That's really reasonable! > That sounds reasonable to me.
Notes> Do not use "etc." when you use "for example" or "such as ", since these words already mean you are only going to name a few of them, not all. Etc. = and others .
Use "such as" when the things you have mentioned is included in the list-- because "like" can mean to be similar but not exactly it.
I like fruits like apple > not apple , but something like apple . I like fruits such as apple > you like apple and all fruits like it.
You have met with 2 situations that you to decide how to refer back to "a kid" mentioned earlier : you use "he". But this is gender bias .
Use singular "they" to avoid this . This is an acceptable change to its plural form. > Whenever I see a friend , I always shake their hands .
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Chinese children are suffering from too much homework and various training courses.
Nowadays, most Chinese children are given excessive homework by their schools. From Monday to Friday, my 9 year-old daughter has to work on her homework until 9:00pm. She also has more to do on the weekends.As China has the biggest population in the globe, the competition for better employment and life are becoming very serious and fierce.
To strengthen their various skills, almost every kid is sent to training schools for different courses, like dancing, music, weiqi and drawing, etc. on the weekends by his parents.
I learned from some friends who live in Europe that only when a student is in 6th grade he is assigned homework by the teacher. That's really reasonable!
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Chinese children are suffering from too much homework and various training courses.
Nowdays, most Chinese children are given excessive homework by their schools. From Mondays to Fridays, my 9-year-old daughter has to work on her homework until 9:00pm. She also has more to do on the weekends.As China has the biggest population in the globe, the competition for better employment and life are becoming very serious and fierce.
To strengthen their various skills, almost every kid is sent to training schools for different courses, like dancing, music, weiqi and drawing, etc. on the weekends by his parents.
I learned from some friends who live in Europe that only when a student is in Grade 6, he is assigned homework by the teacher. That's really reasonable!
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