Most disasters are gift, don’t worry, be patient.
All of us face with different disasters and circumstances during our life time. Some of them are unwanted and unpredictable but one thing is important : OUR REACTION.
This obstacles can be a ladder or a deep, dark well! It depend on our personality. First reactions are shock, worry and cry and then we blame our self and others. We waste times with nagging and whining. Finally we get a result: we have to continue … . After some years, when we think about past and our new situation, we understand it was a part of mature. It was useful not an evil. Disasters are a kind of forced guidance for stubborn people! Some of the most important and main inventions and discoveries took place during wars (1) such as penicillin and aircrafts or about earthquake! It has a lot of benefits , too (2).
Disasters are a force to emerge our invisible abilities and talents. They are a spark to fire our engine!
Me as a person who passed different circumstances, I have an advice for you:
Don’t worry, don’t waste time, it is a kind of gift, be patient.
What is your opinion about disaster?
Do you agree with me?
And please correct me text.
Thank you.
(1) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Technology_during_World_War_II
(2 ) http://www.ehow.com/info_8761480_do-earthquakes-positively-affect-environment.html
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hi Mitra, as for circumstances of particular person life but not disaster, not disaster for the whole country I agree with you. When something happens I try to find out what I know about it for? What conclusion from this situation I need to make, what I need to understand or take into account... perhaps this situation shows me my weaknesses, that is the place for improvement. By the way it's a good approach to learn on other's mistakes
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Most disasters are a gift. Don’t worry, be patient.
All of us are faced with different disasters and circumstances during our lifetime. Some of them are unwanted and unpredictable, but one thing is important : OUR REACTION.These obstacles can be a ladder or a deep, dark well! It depends on our personality. The first reactions are shock, worry, and tears, and then we blame ourselves and others. We waste times with nagging and whining. Finally, we get a result: we have to continue … . After some years, when we think about the past and our new situation, we understand it was a part of maturing. It was useful, not an evil. Disasters are a kind of forced guidance for stubborn people! Some of the most important and main inventions and discoveries took place during wars, (1) such as penicillin and aircrafts, or from earthquakes! They have a lot of benefits , too (2).
Disasters are a force to bring out our invisible abilities and talents. They are a spark to fire our engine!
I am a person who passed different circumstances, so I have some advice for you:
Don’t worry, don’t waste time, it is a kind of gift, so be patient.
What is your opinion about disasters?
Do you agree with me?
And please correct my text.
Thank you.
(1) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Technology_during_World_War_II
(2 ) http://www.ehow.com/info_8761480_do-earthquakes-positively-affect-environment.html
-'Lifetime' and 'ourself/ourselves' are written as one word.
-'Aircraft is uncountable, so you don't need the 's' for the plural.
-You already said 'most important' [inventions], so 'and main' was redundant.
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