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Diary of my life in Canada September 4 I've been in Canada since this March. It's been 6 months. I'll finally graduate from ESL two weeks later. I'm sure I'll miss my school. I've met many foreign students and native teachers in school. And my counselor, who is Japanese man, always helps me and encourages me. I really appreciate him. I want to spend good time at my school in two weeks left. I'm on long weekends now, but I haven't slept enough. I'm sleepy..... But I have to go out in 2 hours to meet my friend. We're supposed to go to a music festival! I'm so excited now, but at the same time, I'm really sleepy.lol I have a lot to do. I have to write a resume to get a job, and apply for some jobs that I want. Yesterday, I met friend who got a job at Starbucks. He always try to do everything that he want to do. He is honest and interesting. He never afraid that if he would mess up. He had applied so many companies to get a job, but he actually couldn't it. And he had been working a cafe for three months. But, I heard good news from him yesterday. Finally he got a job at Starbucks that is one of jobs he had been wanting to do. So when I heard that, I was happy and the news made me encourage. He applied it three months ago, but Starbucks hadn't answered for three months. And he just had the interview last week and got a job. It's a success of him. Even though he applied to many companies and didn't get answers from them, Star bucks contacted to him. And he go the job!!!! This is his achievement! I'll do something for getting a job after coming back home today. I also never give up!!!

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Diary of my life in Canada September 4

I've been living Canada since this March. It's been 6 months.
I'll finally graduate from ESL in two weeks later. I'm sure I'll miss my school.
I've met many foreign students and native teachers in school.
And my counselor, who is a Japanese man, always helped me and encouraged me.
I really appreciate him.
I want to enjoy remaining 2 weeks at school.

I'm on It is currently the long weekend now, but I haven't slept enough. I'm sleepy.....
But I have to go out in 2 hours to meet my friend.
We're supposed to go to a music festival!
I'm so excited, but tired at the same time. I'm really sleepy. lol

I have a lot to do. I have to write a resume to get a job, and apply for some jobs that I want.
Yesterday, I met friend who got a job at Starbucks.
He always tried to do everything that he want to do.
He is honest and interesting. He's never afraid that if he would mess up.
He had applied to so many companies to get a job, but he actually couldn't get one.
And Now, he has been working a cafe for three months.
But, I heard good news from him yesterday.
Finally he got a job at Starbucks. That is one of jobs he wanted. had been wanting to do.
I was happy when I heard that, and the news made encouraged me. (English is a subject prominent language. Try to use less topic prominence sentence structure!)
He applied it three months ago, but Starbucks didn't answered for three months.
And He just had the interview last week and got a job. (Try to not use And when starting a sentence. That's only ok good in Japanese.)
It's a good achievement for him. Even though he applied to many companies and didn't get answers from them, Star bucks contacted to him. That's when he got the job!  This is a great achievement!

I'll do something about getting a job after going back home today.
I will also never give up!!!

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