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i want to improve
Basically, I understand English. I just need to practice so I can fluently talk in English. i love speaking in English and make new friends from all over the world. I want to improve my vocabularies as well. I often talk using common words, and sometimes i still don't know the English word for lot of things. i have so much work on my vocabulary lol. my grammar is still bad too. i have so many things to improve though.I (always capitalized) ....
... need to practice so that ("so that" implies intention - "so" cannot be used for this function, though you sometimes hear it used that way in spoken English) I can talk fluently (adverbs of manner often after main verb)
I love speaking ... and making (parallel structure: both "speaking" and "making" are verbal complements of "love")
improve my vocabulary (word usually not used in plural form)
I often use common words when I talk = less awkward
for a lot of things
I still have do much work to do on my vocabulary ....
... though (implies a contradiction -- more likely: "In fact, there are a lot of things that I need to work on/improve.
i I want to improve
Basically, I understand English. I just need to practice so I can fluently talk in English. i I love speaking in English and make making new friends from all over the world. I want to improve my vocabularyies as well. I often talk using common words and sometimes i I still don't know the English word for a lot of things. i I have so much work to do on my vocabulary lol. mMy grammar is still bad too. i I have so many things to improve though.Only a couple of corrections Rina, well done! Your written English is certainly already impressive. One suggestion from this entry would be to always use a capital 'I' rather than a little 'i' when you are writing about yourself.
You are certainly in the write place to practice and further your English skills so I wish you luck in your studies. Tom :)
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