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I want to learn swimming I forgot to write my daily yesterday, maybe it is difficult to do this practice everyday, maybe I can just write some important things. Good excuses, ha ha. Yesterday, I want to have a swim in our school's constant temperature swimming pool, but I was late. Today, I will go there again. Although I am not a good swimmer, I hope I can learn it very much. Then, the question about saving mom or girlfriend will be solved. : )

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I want to learn swimming.

I forgot to write my daily yesterday. Maybe it is difficult to do this practice everyday. Maybe I can just write some important things. Good excuses, ha ha. Yesterday, I wanted to have a swim at our school's constant temperature swimming pool, but I was too late. Today, I will go there again. Although I am not a good swimmer, I hope I can learn to be good at it very much. Then, the question about saving my mom or girlfriend will be solved. : )


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The rest of your paragraph is fine apart from those corrections. Very simple English for now. Good luck!



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I want to learn swimming

I forgot to write my daily entry yesterday. maybe It is difficult to do this practice everyday, so maybe I can just write some important things. Good excuses, ha ha. Yesterday, I want to have went for a swim in our school's constant temperature-controlled swimming pool, but I was late. Today, I will go there again. Although I am not a good swimmer, I hope I can learn it very much. Then, the question about saving my mom or girlfriend will be solved. : )

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哈哈，just kidding.
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那就找他的妈妈会游泳的男朋友 ;)
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Ha ha, saving mom or girlfriend is a difficult question for chinese boys. If I can swim, I can be a sweet girlfriend let him to save his mom, or I can save his mom. But I am not good at swimming now.

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