Practice 1

Hello! This is Doyeon from Seoul, Korea.
Well, I'll tell something about me :)
I love films, music, drawing and fashion.
I'm a student but now I'm taking a year off from school.
And so I''m planning to study jewelery design.
Not really seriously, I've just wanted to know is if it really fits me.
Oh actually I lived in England for less than a year. I was there untill last year.
At the begining I was so a very shy girl so I didn't talk much. And English accent was quite unfamiliar. But what/how about a month later? I fell in love with England. I loved everything of the whole city I lived. Oh but except for the weather haha.
Now I miss every single person I met, the roads, the cafe I used to go to, the beach. Well even the weather. Ah please bring me back there right quick  right now/quickly! :)

Although I went to England, my English skill is not that good.
Well, writing is much better than speaking.
Especially speaking is really a problem/is a real problem, I think. As i told you I am shy and it's the only reason but hard the only but hard reason to change myself :)
I don't want to lose my English skills any longer, also i want  and I also want to improve it.
That's why I'm looking for the people who exchange language with me :)

Cheers

Hi Doyeon! Your written English is quite good :)

Remember that the pronoun "I" must be capitalized all the time (so it is always written "I" and never "i"), and that also the names of languages must be capitalized (for example "English" and not "english")

have a nice day!! :)

Practice 1

Hello! This is Doyeon from Seoul, Korea.
Well, I'll say something about me. :)
I love films, music, drawing and fashion.
I'm a student, but now I'm taking a year off from school, and so I'm planning to study jewelry design.
Not very seriously, but just enough to know whether it's really a fit for me.

Oh, actually I lived in England for less than a year. I was there until last year.
At the beginning, I was such a shy girl, so I didn't talk much, and the English accent was quite unfamiliar. But about a month later, I fell in love with England. I loved everything in the city where I lived. Everything except the weather, haha.
Now I miss every single person I met, the roads, the cafe I used to go, the beach, and well, even the weather. Ah, I wish to go back there soon! :)

Although I went to England, my English skills are not that good.
Well, writing is much easier than speaking.
I think speaking is really the problem. As I told you, I am shy, and it's the only reason. It's hard to change myself. :)
I don't want to lose any more of my English skills. I want to improve them.
That's why I'm looking for people to do a language exchange with me. :)

Cheers!