My dream trip
I'll leave on November 25 and return on December 24.
First of all, I'll take the route toward Spain, then to France, after there, I'll go to Italy also I'll go to Germany and finally I'll be in The United Kingdom.
Where will I choose to stop? Why?
When I go to the United Kingdom I'll visit London because It's the capital and has a famous tower called "Big Ben" and an awesome bridge called "tower bridge" that passes over Rio Tamesis.
How many days will I spend in each place?
First, I'll spend 6 days in Spain, I'd like to be in France for 9 days for sightseeing around the Eiffel Tower, After that, I want to visit Italy for 5 days to try the most famous pizza there, then I'll travel to Germany for 2 days to know. I heard that They make the best beer in the world and finally I'll go to The United Kingdom to take a lot of pictures.
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This sounds like a great trip! I would love to do this too! Here are some tips for mistakes I noticed in the writing below:
the** Remember whenever you talk about a collection of states or islands, you have to use "the". For example: the United States, the Virgin Islands, the United Kingdom, the Florida Keys
is** You only need to use "is" with called when the focus of the sentence is "what it's called". For example: My company is called Computer Tech Inc. (we use "is called" because the focus is the name of the company). I work for a company called Computer Tech Inc. (we use "called" without "is" because the focus is the fact that I work for this company, not the name of the company).
that*** The word "after" needs a friend! In Spanish we can just say "despues" to mean "after that". In English though, you need another word or phrase with "after". For example: "After going home, I ate dinner. After that, I brushed my teeth. After brushing my teeth, I went to bed."
My Dream Trip
I'll leave on November 25 and return on December 24.First of all, I'll take the route toward Spain, then to France, after there, I'll go to Italy also I'll jump go to Germany and finally I'll be in the** United Kingdom.
Where will I choose to stop? Why?
When I go to the United Kingdom I'll visit London because It's the capital and has a famous tower is** called "Big Ben" and an awesome bridge is called "tower bridge" that passes over Rio Tamesis.
How many days will I spend in each place?
First, We'll spend 6 days in Spain, I'd like to be 9 days in France for 9 days for sightseeing around the Eiffel Tower. After that***, I want to visit Italy for 5 days to try the most famous pizza there, then I'll travel to Germany for 2 days to know. I heard that They make the best beer in the world and finally I'll go to the** United Kingdom to take a lot of pictures.
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My dream trip
I'll leave on November 25 and return on December 24.First of all, I'll take the route towards Spain, then to France, after there, I'll go to Italy also I'll go to Germany and finally I'll be in The United Kingdom.
Where will I choose to stop? Why?
When, I go to the United Kingdom I'll visit London because It's the capital and has a famous tower called "Big Ben" and an awesome bridge called "tower bridge" that passes over Rio Tamesis.
How many days will I spend in each place?
First, I'll spend 6 days in Spain, I'd like to be in France for 9 days for sightseeing around the Eiffel Tower, After that, I want to visit Italy for 5 days to try the most famous pizza there, then I'll travel to Germany for 2 days to know. I heard that They make the best beer in the world and finally I'll go to The United Kingdom to take a lot of pictures.
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This is thank to you!:) I'd lime to chat with you. Could we chat to each to other?
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The corrections look great! ~Liz
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