我的男朋友

我的男朋友叫古斯塔夫。他24岁，住在阿雷格里港。他是一名牙医，现在正在任职外科住院医师。他金发碧眼，有着棕色的眼睛，他比我高一点点。我们喜欢旅游，看电影，同朋友玩耍。我们在一起有2年了，我们相处得很融洽。

Could you correct it for me? What a tried to say was:
My boyfriend is called Gustavo. He is 24 years old and lives in Porto Alegre. He is a dentist and is doing surgical residency now. He is blond, has brown eyes and is a little taller than me. We like to travel, watch movies, and spend time with friends. We have been together for 2 years and we get along very well.

我的男朋友

我的男朋友叫古斯塔夫。他是24岁，住在阿雷格里港。他是一名牙医，现在是外科住院医师。他是金发碧眼，有着棕色的眼睛，他是比我高一点点。我们喜欢旅游，看电影，和朋友玩一起玩。我们在一起两年了，相处很融洽。

Could you correct it for me? What a tried to say was:
My boyfriend is called Gustavo. He is 24 years old and lives in Porto Alegre. He is a dentist and is doing surgical residency now. He is blond, has brown eyes and is a little taller than me. We like to travel, watch movies, and spend time with friends. We have been together for 2 years and we get along very well.

我的男朋友

我的男朋友古斯塔夫，今年24岁，目前住在阿雷格里港。作为一名牙医，他现在担任外科的住院医师。他有着一头金灿灿的柔软毛发，还有一对棕色的眼眸，关于他的身高嘛，大概比我高那么一点点吧。我俩热爱旅游，爱看电影，与朋友共享美好时光。顺便补充一句，我们已经在一起两年了，关系可好啦。

Could you correct it for me? What a tried to say was:
My boyfriend is called Gustavo. He is 24 years old and lives in Porto Alegre. He is a dentist and is doing surgical residency now. He is blond, has brown eyes and is a little taller than me. We like to travel, watch movies, and spend time with friends. We have been together for 2 years and we get along very well.

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I had corrected your article with a tone which sounds like a pretty and spirited girl shows her boyfriend and sweet love happily.Best wishes for you!enjoy moment of sweet love!

我的男朋友

我的男朋友叫古斯塔夫。他24岁，住在阿雷格里港。他是一名牙医，现在正在做外科住院医师。他有着金色的头发和棕色的眼睛，比我高一点点。我们喜欢旅游，看电影，喜欢和朋友们在一起。我们在一起已经两年了，并且相处得很好。

Could you correct it for me? What a tried to say was:
My boyfriend is called Gustavo. He is 24 years old and lives in Porto Alegre. He is a dentist and is doing surgical residency now. He is blond, has brown eyes and is a little taller than me. We like to travel, watch movies, and spend time with friends. We have been together for 2 years and we get along very well.

我的男朋友

我的男朋友叫古斯塔夫。他是24岁，住在阿雷格里港。他是一名牙医，现在正在做外科住院医师。他是金发碧眼，有着棕色的眼睛，他是比我高一点点。我们喜欢旅游，看电影，花队与朋友。我们有2年一直在一起，我们相处得很好。

Could you correct it for me? What a tried to say was:
My boyfriend is called Gustavo. He is 24 years old and lives in Porto Alegre. He is a dentist and is doing surgical residency now. He is blond, has brown eyes and is a little taller than me. We like to travel, watch movies, and spend time with friends. We have been together for 2 years and we get along very well.

* 碧: 綠色

*spend time with friends 花時間與朋友相處