The first time I traveled using couchsurfing
In november 2015, I decided to try meet people using Couchsurfing, so I looked for a traveler in Ecuador. I met a girl from Belgium and two guys from Ecuador, we went to a bar, we danced and later we made a pizza (it was delicious).
The next day we ride in bike, it was amazing, it was the first time I enjoyed so much with unknown people.
After that day, I decided to learn english because I liked to meet people from other countries.
It´s the first time I write here, thakns for your corrections.
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Nice job, Andres! Here are my corrections.
The first time I traveled using couchsurfing
In November 2015, I decided to try meeting people using Couchsurfing, so I looked for a traveler in Ecuador. I met a girl from Belgium and two guys from Ecuador. We went to a bar, we danced and later we made a pizza (it was delicious).The next day we rode bikes in bike. It was amazing. It was the first time I enjoyed myself so much with unknown people I didn't know.
After that day, I decided to learn English because I liked to meet people from other countries.
It´s the first time I'm writing here, thanks for your corrections.
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The first time I traveled using Couchsurfing
In November 2015, I decided to try to meet people using Couchsurfing, so I looked for a traveler in Ecuador. I met a girl from Belgium and two guys from Ecuador, we went to a bar, we danced and later we made a pizza (it was delicious).The next day we took a bike ride ride in bike. It was amazing; it was the first time I enjoyed myself so much with strangers unknown people.
After that day, I decided to learn English because I like to meet people from other countries.
It´s the(better: This is the) first time I am writing here, thanks for your corrections.
Great idea, I'll have to try it!
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