about cars and trains
Today I went to my younger sister who is living in Moscow. It's located three hundred kilometers from a place where I am living. I got on a train who had been called "the Swallow'" and, also, the Russian railway company is calling it a "high-speed train" despite the fact that this train is going with average speed only ninety seven km/h (it's in about 60 mph).
Anyhow, a trip by the train take much more time than a trip by a car, because near Moscow, we commonly run into a huge traffic, in which we may stay till a deep night. By the way this traffic is more than just a "traffic", I'd rather say it's a super traffic, it's an enormous tail of cars, in which we can't make out where is the start and where is the end.
That is why, I hardly ever consider visiting Moscow by a car :)
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About cars and trains
Today I went to my younger sister's who is living in Moscow. It's located three hundred kilometers from a the place where I am living. I got on a train whohad been was called "the Swallow'" and, also, the Russian railway company is calling it a "high-speed train" despite the fact that this train is going goes with at an average speed of only ninety seven km/h (it's in about 60 mph).Anyhow, a trip by the train takes much more time than a trip by a car, because, near Moscow, we commonly run into a huge traffic jam in which we may stay till a deep into the night. By the way this traffic is more than just a "traffic", I'd rather say it's a super traffic jam, it's an enormous tail of cars, in which we can't make out where is the start is and where is the end.
That is why_ I hardly ever consider visiting Moscow by a car :)
Great text! ;-)
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about cars and trains
Today I went to (visit) my younger sister who is living in Moscow. It's located three hundred kilometers from a place where I am living. I got on a train (which was) called "the Swallow'" and, also, the Russian railway company is calling it a "high-speed train" despite the fact that this train is going with average speed only ninety seven km/h (it's in about 60 mph).Anyhow, a trip by the train take much more time than a trip by a car, because near Moscow, we commonly run into a huge traffic, in which we may stay till a deep night. By the way this traffic is more than just a "traffic", I'd rather say it's a super traffic, it's an enormous tail of cars, in which we can't make out where is the start and where is the end.
That is why, I hardly ever consider visiting Moscow by a car :)
correct uses in words mostly, but sentences tend to be long; if you want to enhance writing use ";" whenever you can separate sentence into two independent sentences but you want to make one complex sentence structure. Great job though! Sentence structure is a subject that even high schoolers in America who are fluent in English are still learning, great job!
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