Sundae ice cream
The other day we had Sundae ice cream at the library.
The workers of the library treated us with the ice cream while we were watching a movie. (At our library we have special days for watching movies.)
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Sundae ice cream
The other day we had Sundae ice cream in the library.The staffs of the library treated us with the ice cream while we were watching a movie. (In our library, we have special days for watching movies.)
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Ice Cream Sundae
The other day we had ice cream sundaes at the library.
The workers of the library staff treated us with the ice creams while we were watching a movie. (At our library we have special days for watching movies.)Hello Vicka. I hope you find my corrections helpful. Note my use of the plural (sundaes, ice creams), because you are not just referring to yourself but to the members of a group as well.
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Sundae ice cream
The other day we had Sundae ice cream at the library.The library workers treated us to ice cream while we were watching a movie. (At our library we have special days for watching movies.)
English can have many variations (like any language) - but based on the words you have used, I think this sounds better.
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