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My Birthday Today is my birthday,but i almost forget it,because today is workday, and i have lots of things to do.And it is so weird that i don't fell exciting about this birthday,i think it's means i real grown up.

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My Birthday

Today is my birthday, but i I almost forget forgot it, because today is a workday, and i I have lots of things to do. And It is so weird that i I don't fell feel exciting excited about this birthday. i I think it's means  I am a real grown up.


Happy birthday Tianyi! Not too many corrections - just remember to use a capital 'I' instead of a little 'i' when you are talking about yourself and never start a sentence with 'and'. Hope this helps. Enjoy your day :) Tom

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