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Autism is a disorder, mostly among kids. In China, there is not enough awareness of the disease. Most people think they are lonely, stupid, and mute but all of them have talent in art, science, etc.
In fact, they are not like what we think. They understand everything. Thus, if you try to communicate with them, they will be content and friendly even if they don't say a word. However, not all of them have certain talents. They just want to spend more time in what they interest and use another way to describe their words in stead of saying them. In their paintings, colours are widely used. We can read their mind by appreciating their paintings.
Some people think that OK we can donate some money. But the truth is that what they need is not money, but concern and awareness of the public. At the time when all of us can talk to them without descriminations, they will smile happier and live without desperations. Holding out your hands, try to talk to them. Love is the best language for communications.
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Holding out your hands
Autism is a disorder, mostly among kids. In China, there is not enough awareness of the disease. Most people think they are lonely, stupid, and mute but all of them have talent in art, science, etc.In fact, they are not like what we think. They understand everything. Thus, if you try to communicate with them, they will be content and friendly even if they don't say a word. However, not all of them have certain talents. They just want to spend more time in on what they interests them and use another way to describe their words communicate instead of speaking saying them. In their paintings, colours are widely used. We can read their mind by appreciating their paintings.
Some people think that donating money is enough. OK we can donate some money. But the truth is that what they need is not money, but consideration and awareness from the public. At the time When all of us can talk to them without descriminations, discrimination they will smile, *be* happier and live without desperations. Holding out your hands, try to talk to them. Love is the best language for communications.
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Holding out your hands
Autism is a disorder, mostly among kids. In China, there is not enough awareness of the disease. Most people think they are lonely, stupid, and mute, but all of them have talent in art, science, etc.In fact, they are not like what we think. They understand everything. Thus, if you try to communicate with them, they will be content and friendly even if they don't say a word. However, not all of them have certain talents. They just want to spend more time in what they interest and use another way to describe their words in stead instead of saying them. In their paintings, colours are widely used. We can read their mind by appreciating their paintings.
Some people think that "OK we can donate some money". But the truth is that what they need is not money, but concern and awareness of from the public. At the time when all of us can talk to them without descriminations any discrimination, they will smile happier and live without desperations fear. Holding out your hands and try to talk to them. Love is the best language for communications.
A lovely piece with such a strong message Joy. Having taught in China and in Thailand, I fully understand this common misunderstanding across the Asian countries and further afield. More I think is needed to be done, particularly from governments, to make people more aware about the disorder.
Only a few minor corrections made here, but beautifully written. Very heartfelt. Hope this helps :) Tom
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