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Daily sentence 我喜欢绽发唇齿敞开心扉的笑,秀出洁白牙齿的同时也展露了心灵之美——维克多雨果 I like the laughter that opens the lips and the heart, that shows at the same time teeth and the soul.·Victor Hugo~ Let's move on together, Que tengas un buen día~

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我喜欢绽发唇齿敞开心扉的笑,秀出洁白牙齿的同时也展露了心灵之美——维克多雨果
I like the laughter that opens the lips and the heart, that shows, at the same time, teeth and the soul.·Victor Hugo~
Let's  continue together, Que tengas un buen día~

Mikey, 

This is basically correct but for personal preference I would use brackets : (____), or a coma to seperate at the same time. I would also use continue in place of move on. 

Cheers,

Jesse

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