Love & Life

1, I could have born the loneliness if I didn’t meet you.

2, How is it possible to be friends if you have truly loved someone? You will still want to have him when you see him.

3, I thought you would like me if I could make you laugh, but I lost you (needs direct object, who did you lose? I lost "you") to someone who let you cry.

4, Some people are bound to amaze you for a while but cannot warm your life up.

5, Language can be powerless when you are expressing your love, but it can be very so sharp when you are hurting someone.

6, I saw a girl who was holding a box when I was waiting for the bus. I thought she should have resigned her job. As expected, she was telling to (in English we use "to" if you want to say "talking to someone", but telling doesn't use "to") someone on the phone that she had left her company, and she (needs subject, who was going home? she was going home) was going home a few ( it is usually  "a few", "few" is very rare in English) days later. This is such a big city, many people come while countless people leave. She didn’t seem sad at all. I thought she must have been longing to leave this city which was the same as concrete forest. I (needs subject) wish her all the best.

Good job Summer! Some of those sentences were tricky, but you only have a few mistakes.