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Today Today I decided to leave work half an hour before my due time. So at 5.30pm I jumped in my car, I made a stop at my favourite greengrocer shop to buy fruits and vegetables for the whole week and then I came home. I cooked dinner for my family and played with my kids waiting for their father to end work. We sang loud and "off key"(?!) their favourite summer songs. We had a very good time! Unfortunately I usually come home late and I don't have enough time to do all the things I did today and even less time to spend with my family.

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Today

Today I decided to leave work half an hour before my due finishing time. So at 5.30pm, I jumped into my car. I made a stop at my favourite greengrocer shop to buy fruits and vegetables for the whole week and then I came home.

I cooked dinner for my family and played with my kids waiting for their father to end finish work. We sang loud and "off key"(?!) their favourite summer songs. We had a very good time!
Unfortunately I usually come home late and I don't have enough time to do all the things I did today, and even less time to spend with my family.
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Today

Today I decided to leave work half an hour before my due time. So at 5.30pm I jumped in my car, I made a stop at my favourite greengrocer's shop to buy fruits and vegetables for the whole week and then I came home.

I cooked dinner for my family and played with my kids while waiting for their father to end work. We also sang their favourite summer songs loudly and off key. We had a very good time!
Unfortunately I usually come home late so I don't have enough time to do all the things I did today and I have even less time to spend with my family.
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Today

Today I decided to leave my work half an hour earlier before my normal time. Then, at 5.30pm, I jumped into my car and drove  to my favourite greengrocer shop to buy fruits and vegetables for the whole week before I got home.

At home, I cooked dinner for my family and played with my kids, who were still waiting for their father to finish work. We sang aloud, rather off -key, our favourite summer songs. We had a very good time.
Unfortunately, I usually come home late, and I never have the time to do all the things that I have done today, not to mention  the little time that I can spend with my family.

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