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A piece of work about my study studies...
The formation of Chinese city morphology, with its rigid symmetry and formalized symbolism, was based on the guidelines of Rites of Zhou, chapter 'Kao Gong Ji'. Rites of Zhou was actually a work on bureaucracy and organizational theory and, in chapter 'Kao Gong Ji' ,it was documented a set of assignments and guidelines were compiled by realm officials officially, acting to act as an official technical regulation.When we talk about a topic we are studying we generally refer to it in the plural sense ('my studies'). The phrase 'my study' usually refers to a room in a person's house which is used for studying.
Also, when we want to give a piece of information in a sentence which isn't necessary for the sentence to work, we often put two commas around it. For example, 'The formation of Chinese city morphology, with its rigid symmetry and formalized symbolism, was based on the guideline of Rites of Zhou...'. You can see that the sentence does not need 'with its rigid symmetry and formalized symbolism' to work. If we read 'The formation of Chinese city morphology was based on the guidelines of Rites of Zhou...' the sentence reads just fine. Still, the extra information is nice, so we can surround it with a comma on each side to show the this is just a little extra information we have included but not the main poiint of the sentence.
Very good work though! The meaning is clear and it's very well written. Well done!
A piece of work about my study... (☺ an abstract from my studies)
The formation of Chinese city morphology with its rigid symmetry and formalized symbolism ☻,] was based on the guidelines of ☻ + THE "] Rites of Zhou "], ☻ + AT chapter ☻"] Kao Gong Ji "].☻"] (☺THE) Rites of Zhou "] was actually a work on bureaucracy and organizational theory and in chapter ☻"] Kao Gong Ji "] it was documented a set of assignments and guidelines compiled by ☻ realm officially = THE (OFFICIAL) REGNANTS // RULERS, acting as an official(☺THE OFFICIAL REFERENCE FOR) technical regulation(S).
Hi, punctuation is more important than the correct words
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