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An informar email (practing B1 exam) Hi everybody in general, I'm sending a e-mail to all my friends because the next month the company's theatre where I am learning performance will do a play, and I'll have a role in it, it is wonderful! I feel very lucky because I'm only learning three months and I have already chose for it. The play is a comedy which plot to tale the life of a family whose parents have been fire recently and how they are living day to day, the director have tryed that the spectators be able to see the comic side and they be able to have a funny and gratifying emotion when they have finished to see the play. Besides with the ticket you are helping for a good action because the fifty percent of this ticket will be destined to a ONG for homeless, so you can entertain and help at same time. There will be the last weekend of the next month and there will be two shows, the firts in the evening, at 6 p.m, and the last at night, at 22 p.m The cost of tickets not are many expesives, 20€ per ticket and it is a good reason, besides would be a good idea if we can meet when the performance finished and go out to drink something. I hope your rewrite as soon as posible because I have to reserve your tickets beforehand and I need your booking confirmation. Write me soon! Regards

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An informal email (practicing B1 exam)

Hi everybody in general,

I'm sending a e-mail to all my friends because the next month the company's theatre where I am learning performance will do a play, and I'll have a role in it, it is wonderful! I feel very lucky because I'm I've only been learning three months and I have already been chosen for it.
The play is a comedy which plot to tale the life tells the story of a family whose parents have been fired recently and how they are living day to day, the director have tried intended that the spectators be are able to see the comic side and they be are able to have a funny and gratifying emotion when they have finished to see seeing the play.
Besides, with the ticket you are helping for a good action cause because the fifty percent of this ticket will be destined to an ONG (an NGO in English) for the homeless, so you can be entertained and help at the same time.
There It will be the last weekend of the next month and there will be two shows, the first in the evening, at 6 p.m, and the last at night, at 22 p.m 10 p.m. or 22:00.
The cost of tickets not are many expesives is not very expensive, €20€ per ticket and it is for a good reason cause, besides it would be a good idea if we can meet when the performance finishes and go out to drink something (more natural: go out for a drink).

I hope your rewrite back as soon as possible because I have to reserve your tickets beforehand and I need your booking confirmation.

Write me soon!
Regards

Very good Emi. My corrections are in red and suggestions to sound more natural in blue/grey.

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