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Real City changes If you were the Real City council, would you do changes in your city? Well, this is the case of Richar who is the council of Real City. Real City was a city where there were not public transport or hospital, among others. I had never seen a city without basic services due to the fact that people have to walk a lot for buying food or going to the doctor. So, people said that live in these city is terrible. We have to have a car compulsory and a lot of people haven't money to buy it. Richard have been listened this opinion during years. Thus, a hospital was built and public transport was created. Everybody had never been so happy because of the changes. In my view, Richard thought about getting better his city. I've been living there for a few years and the changes were necessary. The next change should be to built a cinema for seeing a lot of films!!

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Real City changes

If you were the Real City council, would you do make changes in your city? Well, this is the case of Richard who is a member of the council of Real City.

Real City was a city where there were not was no public transportation or hospitals, among others issues. I had never seen a city without basic services due to the fact that since people have to walk a lot for to buying food or going to go to the doctor. So, people have said that live  living in these this city is terrible. We have to have a car compulsory and a lot of people haven't don't have the money to buy it. Richard have has been listened to this these opinion complaints during for years. Thus, a hospital was built and public transport was created. Everybody had never been so happy because of the changes.

In my view opinion, Richard thought about getting better his city made his city better. I've been living there for a few years and the changes were necessary. The next change should be to built build a cinema for seeing a lot of films showing lots of movies!!


Notes: This was a good entry! In the future I would focus on reviewing some of the tenses, especially the past as it has a lot of rules and exceptions to those rules. Also, be careful that you're not translating from Spanish to English as it could lead to writing in Spanglish which is a hard habit to get out of. 

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