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Living in a house or in an apartment?
Different people have different views and experiences. There are different life styles when it comes to living all across the world. Some individuals are inclined to live in a house, others tend to live in an apartment.Some people like to live in an apartment due to the cheaper housing price. In recent years, with the development of China estate, people choose to buy an apartment in the city. There are a mountain of reasons. Here just list three reasons for example However, here are just three reasons. First, it is convenient and efficient for going to work as well as the supermarket in the case of they have no cars. Second, they are likely to work out with no need to go to gym when they have to be home by going upstairs. Third, there are a lot of neighbours who can help each other when they have a good relationship.
Otherwise, others prefer to live in a house. More space is the first thing that jumped into my mind when it comes to the advantages of living in a house. This is so you can arrange your furniture wherever you want. The following Another advantage is you will feel at ease even if you play the heavy music. This is because you don't need to consider worry about the neighbours getting annoyance ed. Third, you will have the capability to hold more visitors.
Finally, from my personal perspective, living in a house is better than living in an apartment. Children who are always curious about surroundings need more chance to be close to nature in order to enhance their cognitive abilities. You will get less trouble. For instance, if you live in on the 2nd floor and happen to break your water pipe for a long time, your neighbours downstairs will become mad.
In a conclusion, compared with living in an apartment, living in a house has more advantages.
An interesting notebook entry Jane, I enjoyed reading this. Only a few corrections/additions that I made in order for it to read a little bit more fluently. Hope these help you :) Tom
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