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China flagSelene 黄
Le voleur d'ombres How hard to forget a girl that used a kite to write" I like you". He is weak and thin, and maybe because of that his classmates always bully him. One day, he found out that he is able to steal people's shadow, and the shadow could tell him stories as well as aspirations that they are not willing to share with others. He started to help people bring back the hope. In a summer, he encountered a beautiful girl who is both deaf and mute and fell in love with her. They made a promise to meet again, but they failed. When the boy turned into a man, he became a doctor, and the girl became a violoncellist. Although he has a girlfriend , he always thinks of the girl he met in that bright summer. After his mother's death, he decided to look for ture love and he made it eventually. You stole my shadow and I will miss you no matter where you are.

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Great job, don't be so rude Alex :'(
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It's T R U E. Not ture. How many times do I need to tell you?
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You stole my shadow. Irregular verb. Other than that it's a good bit of writing

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