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Would someone correct my English? Hi there, how's it going? I plan to apply to the university in the UK. Sentences below are from my paper. I need your help to correct them. I am especially worried about grammar and the use of ":". "I am attracted by your distinctive feature: offering the opportunity to learn the marketing skill from both theoretical and analytical aspects. I am especially interested in A and B modules. These will be very beneficial and ideal to gain a deeper understanding of practical analysis skill to analyse customer’s potential needs."

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Would someone correct my English?

Hi there, how's it going?

I plan to apply to the university in the UK.
Sentences below are from my paper.
I need your help to correct them.
I am especially worried about grammar and the use of ":".

"I am particularly attracted by your distinctive feature: offering the opportunity to learn the marketing skills from both theoretical and analytical aspects. I am especially interested in A and B modules A and B. These will be very beneficial to me and ideal to gain for gaining a deeper understanding of practical analysis skill to analyse customer’s potential needs."


Note: You don't need to use a colon ( : ) here as it sounds more natural without it. However, if you really wanted to use it, you have used it correctly. Well done :)

I would make it more clear by saying 'I am attracted by your institution's distincitive feature' or 'I am attracted by your course's distinctive feature'.

Or you can change the colon for an 'of', as suggested above.

Good luck! If you need any more help you feel free to contact me directly :)

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Would someone correct my English?

Hi there, how's it going?
Would you do me a favor?

I am planning  to apply for a university in UK.
Sentences below are from my paper.
Would you check them?
I am especially worried about grammar and the use of ":".

"I am attracted by your distinctive feature  of offering the opportunity to learn Marketing skills from both theoretical and analytical aspects. I am especially interested in A and B modules. These will be very beneficial and ideal for me to gain deep understanding of practical analysis skills to analyse customer’s potential needs."

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